Kayleigh
WWW:
Some effective analysis here with a clear attempt to highlight the conventions specific to your genre.
Some good use of Media language that has been applied appropriately.
EBI:
Try to really explore the use of technology in making your posts interesting- can you use JING with your comments over the top of a video or even film yourself making an evaluation.
I also see you have still all the audience research and the application of theory to upload. Please see me if you need any help on completing this work as unfortunately this Assessment must state your work needs IMPROVEMENT. You have until Friday 7th October.
JIN
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