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Sunday, 18 September 2011

Assessment (SUMMER WORK) 18/09 SJA

WWW:
- Very pleasing to see a much more organised and up-to-date blog Kayleigh - big improvement on Year 12!
- You have clearly taken lots of care taken to compose very good contact sheets - all posts are visual because of the use of contact sheets
- Evidence of careful thinking and analysis for every post completed as part of the summer work. Some good reference to specific conventions / techniques, and a clear understanding of the features of a successful music video. You clearly gained a lot of useful ideas from the 'In The Sun' class shoot. You blog is looking very good so far.

EBI:
- Just some suggestions to help you improve the work: The contact sheets are very good Kayleigh, and it's good to see each post is visual, but try to show a more varied use of media to create visual posts.
- I'd suggest that you try to take short extracts (clips) from some of the music videos you have anaylsed instead of relying on contact sheets for all posts. This would boost marks for 'creativity' and 'skill in the use of media and ICT'. Try creating a 'voice over commentary' parhaps for your analysis of the low budget videos to talk through the ideas you liked and the approaches (lighting / shots) that you felt were successful.
- Make sure you show that you are thinking about 'genre' when analysing the pop and rock videos - and check your analytical posts to make sure you are using as much media language as possible (mise-en-scene, etc).

Effort for Summer Work: Very good

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